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mother's face looks
like a calf
I asked and she laughed
tonight well see
the black goat
eat her young
the old stains
show what's done
mother's tears
and babe's blood

Gretel she's
lost us
again
Gretel she's
tried to feed
again
Gretel there's
snow on the
breeze
Gretel, we
need to get
warm or well freeze
Gretel, theres
a house on
the hill
Gretel, its
the house or
the chill
Gretel we cant trust strangers we cant trust nature we couldent trust the crumbs
Gretel we can still make it we can take ourself in and melt our thumbs

goodwife's face looks
like a calf
i asked and she laughed

Gretel it will be warm in the oven
Gretel it will be warm in the fire
Gretel its warm in the calfs head
Gretel its warm in tophet

Moloch's face is
a silver calf
i screamed for help and it laughed
the black goat
eats her young
the old stains
show whats done
mother's tears
and babe's blood
©2004-2009 ~duct-tape-face
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this is a peice im hoping will be polished enough to use for koffehaus this friday... ive been having trouble getting it to work right and thought that perhaps you guys might be able to give me a hint.

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:iconduct-tape-face:
reference:
Moloch was a deity of some sort which require child sacrifice once a year or so. The children were sacrificed in a temple in or called tophet, on a hill, by putting them in the statue of the god's head, which was shaped like a cow's. the head contained a fire that burned the children alive, while preist's played tamborines and drums to drown out the screams.
also refers to the Hansel and gretel story, which i am convince is about a mother attempting to eat her children, somewhat disguised.
for you lovecraftians out there, the black goat of course refers to shub-niggurath, the creation prinicible and mother of all life or something.
i refered to the witch as goodwife, a common title for women in early english america, as the witch disguised herself as a nice old woman in the story.
btw, this is lyrics for a song which i believe will end up as progressive metal of some sort to be played at koffehaus, a monthly talent show at s&m.

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:iconserendipity1287:
I think that this is my favourite of yours thus far.

I think it works quite nicely the way it's layed out... and the references to different sources comes together wonderfully.

I really like this... a lot. It's nice to see something new from you :c)
:iconmyseveredheart:
koffeehaus?
explain.
i like the way it flows riley... perhaps lyrics of somesort i hope?

-josh
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Thank you! i think i really put more effort in this one with multiple references in here and such. glad it turned well. Thanks for the fav!

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:iconduct-tape-face:
Koffeehaus is monthly talent show here at s&m... fairly small room were for about an hour various people get to together and play a few songs, recite some poetry, and sing a few songs. and a bit of comedy. tis muy fun.
and it tis for song... which hasnt been written yet.

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:iconremembermenot:
oh wow... this will be great. i've heard what kevin's got of the song so far.... it'll be pretty fucking sweet. i'm dying to hear the finished product... better get a move on though! only 3 days! speaking of getting a move on, i plan on performing two songs this time... shit... better practice...

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hmCm

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